So will people tell me if they like this so far? I just got my new laptop for college! Yay! AND OMG! This is so much better! I found out my screen on my old computer was dying so the resolution was bad and made everything 10 times darker so I couldn't see my mistakes! O_O;;; Bleh.... Artist need good equipment to create high quality work... That is something I have learned the hard way =_=;;; Please critique. (And please don't say something like "This sucks!" It wont help me and only makes me feel bad).
I think the girl looks fine--must be hard to draw her in that pose. O_O
The guy looks good too, except if you don't mind me asking: where's his 5th finger? XD I like the way you drew him the best though, keep it up!! >w<
And I like the moon on the background
Looking good so far! ^_^
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ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA! It's behind the piece of paper XDDDDDDD lol Fenni you make me laugh.
Thank you for the comment ;_; I appreciate it. I was worried because the resolution on my old screen was so bad, so when I transferred the document to my lap top I had to make everything darker and more saturated to see the shading. I was afraid the skin shading would look too colorful because of it on other people's screens.
LOL I'm trying to work on sexy guys @_@.... Thanks again!
Nah, I don't think it's too colorful. Like it doesn't blind my eyes, so it's fine >w<
Hope to see the finished product soon!
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Looks really good to me. Saturated colors are awesum >3 I think the guy is pretty handsome XD
Now for the critique... uhm, the thing that bothers me the most is girl's front hand - it feels like the thumb isn't part of it. The sword should be a bit more behind the place where thumb starts, err... growing XD Otherwise it feels like it's cut off. Sorry, I'm kinda bad at explaining >_<''
Also, there seems to be some kind of bump on the left side(from viewers point) of guy's neck.
XD The bump was his manly bumb ROFL! Nah... Your right doesn't make sense I'll get rid of it. :3
Though I'm not quite sure what your saying about the finger @_@ So should I like erase the edge of the sword more to show more of the thumb or shrink the thumb @A@ XD...
Maybe I'm seeing things wrong. Is her sword goes in between thumb and the rest of her fingers? Like this --> [link] ?? If yes, then in your pic it feels like this --> [link] when it should be something like this --> [link]
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The guy looks good too, except if you don't mind me asking: where's his 5th finger? XD I like the way you drew him the best though, keep it up!! >w<
And I like the moon on the background
Looking good so far! ^_^
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Thank you for the comment ;_; I appreciate it. I was worried because the resolution on my old screen was so bad, so when I transferred the document to my lap top I had to make everything darker and more saturated to see the shading. I was afraid the skin shading would look too colorful because of it on other people's screens.
LOL I'm trying to work on sexy guys @_@....
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Nah, I don't think it's too colorful. Like it doesn't blind my eyes, so it's fine >w<
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Now for the critique... uhm, the thing that bothers me the most is girl's front hand - it feels like the thumb isn't part of it. The sword should be a bit more behind the place where thumb starts, err... growing XD Otherwise it feels like it's cut off. Sorry, I'm kinda bad at explaining >_<''
Also, there seems to be some kind of bump on the left side(from viewers point) of guy's neck.
XD The bump was his manly bumb ROFL! Nah... Your right doesn't make sense I'll get rid of it. :3
Though I'm not quite sure what your saying about the finger @_@ So should I like erase the edge of the sword more to show more of the thumb or shrink the thumb @A@ XD...
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Check out my online manga!
[link]
Come join the KakashixAnko club!!!
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