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So will people tell me if they like this so far? I just got my new laptop for college! Yay! AND OMG! This is so much better! I found out my screen on my old computer was dying so the resolution was bad and made everything 10 times darker so I couldn't see my mistakes! O_O;;; Bleh.... Artist need good equipment to create high quality work... That is something I have learned the hard way =_=;;; Please critique. (And please don't say something like "This sucks!" It wont help me and only makes me feel bad).

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:iconfennikusu:
I think the girl looks fine--must be hard to draw her in that pose. O_O

The guy looks good too, except if you don't mind me asking: where's his 5th finger? XD I like the way you drew him the best though, keep it up!! >w<

And I like the moon on the background :D

Looking good so far! ^_^

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:iconichigo-love:
ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA! It's behind the piece of paper XDDDDDDD lol Fenni you make me laugh. :hug:

Thank you for the comment ;_; I appreciate it. I was worried because the resolution on my old screen was so bad, so when I transferred the document to my lap top I had to make everything darker and more saturated to see the shading. I was afraid the skin shading would look too colorful because of it on other people's screens.

LOL I'm trying to work on sexy guys @_@.... :glomp: Thanks again! :heart:

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:iconfennikusu:
XDD

Nah, I don't think it's too colorful. Like it doesn't blind my eyes, so it's fine >w<

:D Hope to see the finished product soon!

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:iconichigo-love:
XD Good to hear. Thank you for making my day XD :hug:

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No problem! ^_^

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^3^ :heart:

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:iconyusarayo:
Looks really good to me. Saturated colors are awesum >3 I think the guy is pretty handsome XD

Now for the critique... uhm, the thing that bothers me the most is girl's front hand - it feels like the thumb isn't part of it. The sword should be a bit more behind the place where thumb starts, err... growing XD Otherwise it feels like it's cut off. Sorry, I'm kinda bad at explaining >_<''

Also, there seems to be some kind of bump on the left side(from viewers point) of guy's neck.
:iconichigo-love:
lol... I guess that's true :hug:

XD The bump was his manly bumb ROFL! Nah... Your right doesn't make sense I'll get rid of it. :3

Though I'm not quite sure what your saying about the finger @_@ So should I like erase the edge of the sword more to show more of the thumb or shrink the thumb @A@ XD... :glomp:

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Maybe I'm seeing things wrong. Is her sword goes in between thumb and the rest of her fingers? Like this --> [link] ?? If yes, then in your pic it feels like this --> [link] when it should be something like this --> [link]

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