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*EDIT: Thank you 
and 
For all the advice!!! I hope it's better now :3
Sorry for not updating for so long!!! I'm finally back from my trip from Asia so I can now update!
I would have updated earlier, but I had jet lag (bad excuse I know XD) and DA is acting all funky on my computer now D: For some reason I can't check my messages or view galleries; the pages just come up blank! Can anyone tell me what's going on? If I haven't replied to your message this is probably the reason why... I just don't get it =.= I don't know if it's DA or my computer, but all the other sites I go on are fine D: GAH!!!
Anyways, I'm restarting my manga for the 3rd godforsaken time XD Hopefully this time will be the last and I can get past 5 pages XD... I'm going to make a new cover and try to make this manga as professional as I can because I'm hoping to publish it someday :'D It's been a goal of mine since I was 12, so I'm not going to give up on it ><;;; I just lack motivation sometimes, but I'm going to change that Even if I only update a page a week/month T_T; Thanks for reading!
Casselia & Aidan (c) *ichigo-love
Art (c) *ichigo-love
and For all the advice!!! I hope it's better now :3 Sorry for not updating for so long!!! I'm finally back from my trip from Asia so I can now update!
I would have updated earlier, but I had jet lag (bad excuse I know XD) and DA is acting all funky on my computer now D: For some reason I can't check my messages or view galleries; the pages just come up blank! Can anyone tell me what's going on? If I haven't replied to your message this is probably the reason why... I just don't get it =.= I don't know if it's DA or my computer, but all the other sites I go on are fine D: GAH!!!
Anyways, I'm restarting my manga for the 3rd godforsaken time XD Hopefully this time will be the last and I can get past 5 pages XD... I'm going to make a new cover and try to make this manga as professional as I can because I'm hoping to publish it someday :'D It's been a goal of mine since I was 12, so I'm not going to give up on it ><;;; I just lack motivation sometimes, but I'm going to change that Even if I only update a page a week/month T_T; Thanks for reading!
Casselia & Aidan (c) *ichigo-love
Art (c) *ichigo-love
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactWhile not a bad work, it's not necessary a good one either. I get the feeling that what I'm looking at doesn't have any depth at all. It looks kind of flat, and it might have been better if we saw the characters standing on the ground, as opposed to their feet cut off. The coloring of the characters are all right, although I notice these lines with their shirts. I can only assume these show the wrinkledness of their shirts.
Probably the thing that's weird is the background. When you see the title, "Final Game," you don't think of something positive, you'd think the characters would look serious: the characters look quite detached, uninspired. They're drawn well, but it seems out of place.
Overall, I can't understand what you were trying to accomplish with the cover; what direction or how should I feel when I look at this? No matter what it is, what you feel or what you want the viewers to feel matters. I couldn't get a good sense from this work.